同等学力英语作文原文
Text message
When it comes to text message, there are defferent opinions about it. Some people think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell. In such a society we live, I believe that text message bring us so many benefits that we can’t deprive its development.
As a new form of communication in our society, almost everything can be done by sending text messages. For sxample: We can communicate with friends in distant areas through messages which are undountedly cheaper than making a phone call. Wheather forecast, jokes, and daily news also can be achieved easily. Today many departments attempt to inform public by sending messages. Contrasted with other communication forms, it is obviously that the text message is economical and convenient. It also break out the limitnation of a nation’s boundary.
In my opinion text message is just a tool. Anyone who owes a mobile can use it. The messages are heathy or not are determined by users. So the related department should strenthen the management of illeagal messages.
评语：得分10-12分
该文完成的比较好，很清晰的表达了自己的观点并且具体阐述，语言的使用也比较灵活，但是，通过通篇的红色批注，相信你也发现了一个问题，你的主要错误时单词拼写上，有可能是打字的出入，但是希望你还是需要加以注意，如果在真正的考试中，出现单词的错误过多，对你的分数影响也是非常大的。
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