2015年在职MBA辅导：英语写作范文(1)

　　案例一：

　　Directions：

　　A. Title：Only Stricter Traffic Laws Can Prevent Accidents

　　B. Word Limit：about 200 words

　　C. Your composition should be based on the Outline　given in Chinese below：

　　1. 每天全世界都有成千上万的人死于交通事故。

　　2. a. 开车的人越来越不注重自己的行为规范，公德意识越来越差。

　　b. 整个社会对肇事者持纵容态度，交通的发展给城市和乡村带来很大影响。

　　3. 制定交通法规遏止交通事故的发生。

　　例文：

　　Only Stricter Traffic Laws Can Prevent Accidents

　　Though the possibility of living a long and happy life　is greater than ever before，　every day we cites the incredible slaughter of men，　women and children on the roads. Man versus the motor-car!It is a never-ending battle which man is losing. Thousands of　people the world over are killed or horribly mutilated each year and we are　quietly sitting back and letting it happen.

　　It has been rightly said that when a man is sitting　behind a steering wheel， his car becomes the extension of his personality. There is no doubt that the　motor-car often brings out a man‘s very worst　qualities. People who are normally quiet and pleasant may become unrecognizable　when they are behind a steering-wheel. They are ill-mannered and aggressive，willful as two-year olds and utterly selfish.

　　The surprising thing is that society smiles so　benignly on the motorist and seems to condone his behavior. Everything is done　for his convenience. Cities are allowed to become almost uninhabitable because　of heavy traffic; the countryside is desecrated by road networks; and the mass　annual slaughter becomes nothing more than a statistic，to be conveniently forgotten.

　　It is high time a world code were created to reduce　this senseless waste of human life. With regard to driving，laws of some countries are notoriously　lax and even the strictest are not strict enough. A code which was universally　accepted could only have dramatically beneficial effect on the accident rate.

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